Wow, I hardly know what to say! This story is so exciting, you grab us by the short hairs and don't let go until the very end. I'm amazed how you kept that excitement up through so many pages. Your characters are pitch perfect, and Jeremiah's slowly growing appreciation for Markus is fantastic!
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Date: 2007-05-22 10:51 pm (UTC)Well done!!!