thanks! And yeah, I originally had a different end (oh man, it gave me fits -- I rewrote the last three paragraphs a gazillion times), where it was Helo's prayer and then Sharon says "so say we all", meaning it as a tribute, but that seemed to imply her faith had changed, and I wanted to keep them separate. So I'm glad the new way worked for you.
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Date: 2006-12-27 07:09 pm (UTC)