yeah, I thought this might be a little interesting, if only because I did so much of it on purpose. I usually am a much more intuitive writer. But there is honestly not a phrase in the whole story that I didn't weigh for how it connects to the previous stories, the sequel, and within the story itself. Which is quite a burden to put on a wee story of five ficlets written for a meme that people toss off in a day!
But I never said I wasn't obsessive, and here's the proof. :D
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Date: 2006-10-13 10:17 pm (UTC)yeah, I thought this might be a little interesting, if only because I did so much of it on purpose. I usually am a much more intuitive writer. But there is honestly not a phrase in the whole story that I didn't weigh for how it connects to the previous stories, the sequel, and within the story itself. Which is quite a burden to put on a wee story of five ficlets written for a meme that people toss off in a day!
But I never said I wasn't obsessive, and here's the proof. :D