Awesome, baybeee! Just awesome. *twirls* I love them all.
Now, for some specifics:
I can't quite place the timing on One, although it's obvious enough that you've done them chronologically. I'm guessing it's post Water, since that's the one with that look in the rain and the almost kiss, just before the radio picks up some kind of signal (damn radio)...
Two is just... *guh* Yeah, I know it's kind of a novelization of what we saw on screen, but still lovely. I'm a big fan of novelizing things, giving them more life and depth than what that little flat screen can bestow, and you've done that here. Brava!
I like Four and Sharon's confusion and reluctance to speak. It feels real and all the more poignant for that.
Five is fun, with them getting lost in their kiss and Adama kinda scurrying to stop that inappropriate hand. *snerk* And the last paragraph is perfect.
But Three is my favorite. Helo accepting her for who and what she truly is and that little bit of teasing at the end. That's what these two are all about.
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Date: 2006-09-09 02:40 am (UTC)Now, for some specifics:
I can't quite place the timing on One, although it's obvious enough that you've done them chronologically. I'm guessing it's post Water, since that's the one with that look in the rain and the almost kiss, just before the radio picks up some kind of signal (damn radio)...
Two is just... *guh* Yeah, I know it's kind of a novelization of what we saw on screen, but still lovely. I'm a big fan of novelizing things, giving them more life and depth than what that little flat screen can bestow, and you've done that here. Brava!
I like Four and Sharon's confusion and reluctance to speak. It feels real and all the more poignant for that.
Five is fun, with them getting lost in their kiss and Adama kinda scurrying to stop that inappropriate hand. *snerk* And the last paragraph is perfect.
But Three is my favorite. Helo accepting her for who and what she truly is and that little bit of teasing at the end. That's what these two are all about.
Thank you so much. *hug*