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Stop lamenting the fact that you are writing crap. You can always fix it later, but stopping to strip out unspeakable adverb abuse, cliches, and infodump-poorly-disguised-as-dialogue as you write it is doing you no favors.
It was however, very nice of you to realize that you are trying to write a short story, not a novel. The conflict is perfectly okay on the interpersonal level and does not need to involve the entire SGC, Jaffa, Tok'ra, Goa'uld, and probably the Wraith too at the rate it was going.
What happens next is a perfectly valid question, but you, self, do not need to answer it at this time.
And stop plotting meta about the Free Jaffa and the Tok'ra. You're just stalling.
Press post and write, already!
Love, Me.
It was however, very nice of you to realize that you are trying to write a short story, not a novel. The conflict is perfectly okay on the interpersonal level and does not need to involve the entire SGC, Jaffa, Tok'ra, Goa'uld, and probably the Wraith too at the rate it was going.
What happens next is a perfectly valid question, but you, self, do not need to answer it at this time.
And stop plotting meta about the Free Jaffa and the Tok'ra. You're just stalling.
Press post and write, already!
Love, Me.
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