This is beautiful, and while sbabe already picked out my favorite line, I'll go ahead and throw out another I loved.
He sits next to the glass so they can talk, and he forces himself to be glad to have even this much. She could be taken away from him so easily, by her own will or someone else's.
What they have is so fragile and precious, and you capture that perfectly. Thanks for sharing lizardbeth, I eagerly await your next piece! Until then, I'll just reread this endlessly. :)
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Date: 2006-04-19 04:17 am (UTC)This is beautiful, and while sbabe already picked out my favorite line, I'll go ahead and throw out another I loved.
He sits next to the glass so they can talk, and he forces himself to be glad to have even this much. She could be taken away from him so easily, by her own will or someone else's.
What they have is so fragile and precious, and you capture that perfectly. Thanks for sharing lizardbeth, I eagerly await your next piece! Until then, I'll just reread this endlessly. :)