Terrific job. :) The characters, their thoughts and their emotions come through as clearly and realistically as ever, and on Sharon's part, her gradual emergence from her grief couldn't be more believable. Also, you do a great job of writing Adama, and the hints of returning trust between him and Sharon make for an excellent touch. That aside, I can easily see the moment of Helo's promotion playing out like this. Great work!
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Date: 2006-04-19 04:08 am (UTC)-Heather