Lizardbeth, you are just plain amazing. This is so wonderful, I love every sentence. The "imagery" of sounds is beautiful, and it's obvious that you've spent time looking and listening through both sets of eyes. :)
I have to admit I have a special place in my heart for the counting of the rivets...I always imagine that she's memorized every detail of her small world, counting every object countless times. :)
Thanks for sharing lizardbeth, I'll be back to read this one many times.
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Date: 2006-04-05 12:48 am (UTC)I have to admit I have a special place in my heart for the counting of the rivets...I always imagine that she's memorized every detail of her small world, counting every object countless times. :)
Thanks for sharing lizardbeth, I'll be back to read this one many times.