Commentary thingie for Five Sunrises

Since everyone has presumably read "Five Sunrises" who's interested in it, I thought I might do a little meta post on it (instead of rambling on in rosiethehobbit's email. :) Probably of no interest to anybody but me, but I know I like to read the "behind the scenes" things writers do, so if you do too, feel free to have a peek.

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