Lizardbeth's Tale

YOU WROTE THE KISS!!! Yaaay! And in an actually believable way, too.

And Leoben as marriage counselor. Marriage counselor who'd kinda like to hit on both the counselees, but still. :)

Lovely. Sad, but not all gloom and doom, either. Nice job. :)

ETA: Did you mean to post this to pyramidofdreams? 'Cause it says you did but I'm not seeing it there.